| ""Truth or Dare?"" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: My view..
Reviewed By: 'spoiler-me' On: January 12, 2008 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know.. This story might be brighten up by adding more details that are imaginable by the readers.. And the paragraphs are too close to each other like the world is so populated.. Please check your spacing.. Anyways, I'll be waiting for your update.. Ja Ne..! 'spoiler-me'
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: inufan997 On: November 21, 2007 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
as good as the story is, there is so much more that can be added too it. the pace also moved too face. perhaps slow it down, add more to the story, details, and it could become a lot better. good start though. keep writing.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 05:30 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting is all i can say XD
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