| "Punishment" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 15:34 CDT
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O_O I knew it...I DID read this story! Cool....Oh, and I fond the song this time! YAAY! Lol, that was such a cute srory! Keep it up and make more!
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Title: Lil Babe0206
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 20:00 CST
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Same with me, wen i finished da stori i ended up saying 'awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!'. it was just so cute! urgh!!! i spent an hour looking for dat song on da internet and youtube and didnt find, cuz i luv to hear da song wen i read a song fic it makes it sound real, and i couldnt find da song newere! so i gave up nd read da song! but it was an awsome fic!!!! so keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 21:20 CST
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You're right. It was much better than your summery suggested. I love how Inuasha wanted to pummel whoever was depressing his Kagome. Your story was very cute and made me say "Awwww" at the end. I don't usually like song fics but you pleaded us to read and I think you did a nice job. The only negative thing I have to say about it is that you need to proof read your stories a little better before posting. There were quite a lot of run on sentences, missing punctuation, missing words and letters. Aside from that, I think that you did an excellent job and hope to see more writing from you in the future.
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