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| "Bottomless Pit" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: I loved it
Reviewed By: PlumBgrl On: February 16, 2011 02:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style is excellent and I loved their internal dialogue. So cute! Great job! | Title: Fan-freaking-tastic!
Reviewed By: Fictionploo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 06:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! This is what I'm talking about, a lemon with a damn story behind it that makes sense. This story was fan-freaking-tastic, I hope you have more stories like this. Bravo.
| Reviewed By: Avanelle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! Totally amazing. The only thing that sorta bugged me was when Fuu was all OOC, asking for Mugen's cream, it was kinda weird. But, other thann that, awesome!
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