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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 01:26 CST
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how horrible. glad they can give each other comfort. he still didn't answer her question and i guess in light of the gruesome discovery she's already forgotten about it. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 14:41 CST
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OMG! I'm *so* loving your story. It's just so amazingly entertaining. I really like the Inuyasha/Kagome interaction. I wonder how long Inuyasha will be able to hold out. He totally just needs to tell her what he is and ravish her alerady!! LOLZ, but in all seriousness, you got me totally hooked. Anyway, sorry to hear about all the stuff you have to do, and you're still in your teens!!! I wish I could say it gets easier, but it doesn't. I'm 26, married and I have a wonderful little daughter (18 months old) and I'm surprised I have time to even sleep. I'm struggling to write my own fics, but I'm doing okay... Well, hope to see a new chapter from ya soon, I know I'll be working on mine as well. XOXO
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Title: Author Note
Reviewed By: LunarVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 21:24 CST
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Hey, I am really sorry I have been having some techincal difficulties with the new computer, but Chapter one is now up and running. Thank you for pointing it out...I also have the story up on fan fiction if you can't view it here.. Thanks -LunarVixen
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 17:23 CST
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i have the same problem but different. i'm the caretaker of everyone in my family who is sick and/or dying... be glad you don't have my job. . . reading fan fiction is my escape. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 15:40 CST
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um...you realise that this has no chapter 2 right? I really do want to read it, but without the first chapter, i really cant do that. Check it, cause the first chapter is chapter 2.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 12:26 CST
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at least a reprimand or even suspension for disobeying orders and possibly endangering the mission. one would think that someone in a such a position (run structurally similarly to the military) would know better than to do what she did. interesting chapter ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: very noce
Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it , it was very interesting and i am ready for more
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 00:09 CST
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yess!! power to the women!! lol! yea...imma dork...anyways...awwwss!! i feel soo special right now...sooooo...keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it so far, When Inuyasha Talk with Kagome during their breakfast, I thought he was a little outa character for a minute, but when you had them fighting it made sence. though I think Inuyasha personilty would have to change a little bit for an AU fic. I really like, your story, Its going on my favs ^_^ keep it up
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 00:24 CST
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hmmm...you know...this looks like its gonna be a really good story...so keep up the great work and can't wait to see what happens next
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