Reviewed By:SmilingOnigiri [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 22:17 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Very nice! There was enough angst (yaoi is always better with some angst) but not so much that it was depressing or that it detracted from the smuttiness (yaoi is always better with smut). ;-) I'm new to KKM so I can't really comment on the characters, but I did like Wolf as the seme. The writing is good. I liked the little bits of humor and references to things such as game shows, however the wrong word was used quite often. For example "accent" instead of "ascent". (Unfortunately spell checker doesn't catch such mistakes.)
