| "Ranma and Ranko" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 18:46 CDT
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Not a bad start, don't usualy see Ranma having a sister like Ranko unless she went on the training trip with him or was some magical accident and was created at the springs or something. That beign said I do have to wonder where this is going in the long run. Will this be a Ranma/Ranko pairing? Or more? I really love the Ranma and Ranko pairing, imo it's the only boy in the Ranma universe fit for Ranko but I am not sure how I feel with her being an actual blood relative to Ranma. Still wierder relationships have existed in fanfiction like those Kuno/Kodachi pairings*shrug*
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 10:59 CST
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Looks like this will be a good story (yes, I'm agreeing with the other reviewers). Just one thing. Rated X? Is it going to get worse? You might consider changing this if graphic sex is not going to be involved.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 07:55 CST
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I've read several stories where Ranma has a sibling, but none where the sibling is as weird as Ranma himself. Interersting start, although you should reread the chapter as there are a lot of mistakes. The eldest Tendo daughter is called Kasumi, not Kasume. I'll read the next chapters if this isn't a Ranma/Akane story.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 16:41 CST
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I like this idea... I've got a similar one for Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time... but not quite the same... I like it! Keep up the good work... And do try to check your spelling and proofread just a bit.
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Reviewed By: S Cubed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 10:50 CST
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This is pretty good for a first run. It's a bit short right now to really critique, so I'll wait until the next installment and see what there is to work with. Good job so far.
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