Reviewed By:Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 23:36 CST Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By:lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 22:17 CST Comment/Review: wow...this was a great story...like i really liked the story line and everything...but (yes the oh so famous but) there are a few things that i think you should change to make this story better...like to keep the p.o.v's consistant...like to keep the part when inu's giving tips in the first person pov and the other parts in the third person pov...it'll make it a little less confusing...and to put why kag was mad at him...like you kinda get a hint in the song that sess said something about her apperance or whatever...but its not really clear and theres still that lingering question at the end....but other than that...it really was a good story and i can't wait to see what's gonna happen next (if you make a sequal that is)
