| "Same Old Tired Story" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: anima constrictor On: February 26, 2009 22:08 CST
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nice job. i completely forgot about this fic and had to reread the 1st 2 chapters (both were as good as i remember) and would have to say i'm impressed. please continue this story and update sooner
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Title: hmm.
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty nice...cant say more...i mean more pls.^-^v
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Title: Optional Title
Reviewed By: Name/Nick: On: June 28, 2008 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like. Will you write moar, pl0x?
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Reviewed By: denisud On: June 15, 2008 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that I re-read chapter one i can see what's coming next... and all before he goes to school(Hikari) or meets the 2nd Child(Auska). OH BOOOOYEEEE!
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Reviewed By: denisud On: June 15, 2008 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
My only real quirk is that IMHO Love then lust should be a goal for an unloved person such as Shinji is. I can see more females would want to help in the cuase if he loves them! dennisud
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Title: Invigorating a Chiche'
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What i liked about this one is the hint of true caring between Shinji & Rei. Not the slam-bamg crap most lemons have intentionally driving home toe idea that this ia sex and not making love which in my opinion both did here. Oh and I'd like to see where this contest IS on the net! If you won with this ditty I'd like to read more! dennisud
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Title: Nice one
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always wanted to see a fanfic like this. And now you fulfilled my wish. Thanks a lot. Hopefully you make another chapter or another Rei/Shinji story with lemon.
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Reviewed By: Remember_Byron [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 06:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice...I love the reference to ReDeath at the End. Man, im getting real sick of his theme song
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Reviewed By: .yuwa On: November 30, 2007 02:41 CST
Comment/Review:
i think ive read something like this before...(talk about de javu)
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