| "Pieces Of Me" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 08:44 CDT
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WOW that was good for u never writing a sas/ita be4!!!! I miss you!!! Oh we have A LOT TO TALK ABOUT!!!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 07:20 CDT
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I LOVE YOU!!!! Fissure is an interesting title for it but it's cool!!!
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Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 09:30 CDT
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it would more that likely hurt the baby in the long run.
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Title: spell chack
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 09:29 CDT
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He shut the eye off for the scrambled eggs, and concentrated on making his own breakfast. Naruto walked into the kitchen just as his waffles popped out of the toaster, and he grabbed a place from the cupboard.
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Reviewed By: Vampire Kitty On: April 20, 2008 23:39 CDT
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How about doing a Sasuke/Itachi oneshot for this series? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 06:56 CDT
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Hey which chapter is dedicated to me I ddin't see it!!!
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Title: I'm helping you by spell checking
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 06:49 CST
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"Yeah." Sakura whispered, as her eyes felt shut, lips parted slightly. isnt it supposed to be fell shut??
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 07:17 CST
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I agree about Drabble 3 its cute but it could have been better!!! Anyway missed u at the concert!!!
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Title: I'm Betaing
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 07:10 CST
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"Oi, Naruto!" Kiba slurred, as he sauntered over to the blolnd with a drink in his hand. The dog boy's cheek's were red from the alcohol in his system. "Hey, b-blondie, you have anyoone to kiss?" anyone is spelled wrong hun!!! Love you!!! Oh im gonna print these today along with Boxers or Breifs!!!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! More Drabbles!!! I love these stories their fun to read can't wait till you post more up!!! But yea I thought of a pairing for your Yuri chapter I will talk to you about that later I will tell you it is not SakuIno!!!
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Reviewed By: demon hex core [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
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please do not make any more yaio i mean how hard do you have to make it before i see a good yuri or hetro story around here
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