| "Mountain of Needles" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 04:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice. I love the way Goku uses the situation to get what he wants - it's very resourceful of him. This just makes the inevitable ending of the battle that much more difficult for both of them. Or maybe you'll keep writing and change things? :D
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Title: Zofo
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 18:37 CST
Comment/Review:
You're continuing it, wonderful. Lovely bit of pre-fusion sex there, I was afraid they would be interrupted before they could finish. Will Vegeta regret it, and was it just because he knew that even if they won he'd be going back to hell and never see Goku again? Looking forward to the fusion now and what further things Goku discovers about him.
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: December 02, 2007 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What secrets about Vegeta will Goku discover during the fusion? Oh this begs for a sequel. Pretty please.
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