| "An Alchemic Reaction" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: bethany [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do hope that you are still writing, and that you are going to finsh this story also. I think that you have some thing good going on with this story, and I hope that you are going to finsh it. I know being newly married and just frash out of college can make life intresting. So remeberre we'er still also. lol
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2010 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
an interesting read so far. please continue. normally i'm not so happy with this pairing but you are gradually changing my mind. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: amz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 01:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey so far this is nice. I have one CC though and that is this structure: Blank happened causing person(s) to Blank. This seems to happen a lot in fanfics. Throw in a few more ands and vary the structure it'll make your writing more believable.
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Reviewed By: jbowman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I have been so busy with school that it was really nice to take a short little break and read this juicy Fanfic! Your are doing a great job! The story flows and you have managed to really keep the character's personalities alive. I'm really curious and looking forward to seeing this great work finished! Will you be any loose ends for Ed and Al as well? Big Props! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Ryoko Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 01:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooh very steamy! I'm liking this alot. I can't wait to see what develops, and who exactly is the blonde woman on the cot? Update soon... like tomorrow haha.
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