Title: From the Forums
Reviewed By: Hurricane Islandheart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is exceptionally difficult to read. It needs a lot of work to improve the structure and grammar. Your use of random capitalization and lack of punctuation is a particularly noticeable problem in this fic. Along with that, you rush through the story and try to sum up would could be a multi-chapter fic into only a couple of paragraphs. I strongly encourage you to find someone to help you with your technical writing to improve your story.
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