| "Last Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: EV On: July 02, 2008 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omgosh! That cannot end like that! Amazingly written! I hope you continue!
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Title: Wow amazement
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
This is an awsome fanfic and i hope that it will become an actuall fanfic story rather than a oneshot because it makes me wonder what will happen now, will she be able to feel needed? Wanted? or will she suffer again? I hope that she will be able to feel complete where she would be now. Please create it as a story rather than a one shot. I'd really enjoy reading more ^ ^ great job ^ ^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
also include what sesshomaru was thinking since it seems he saved her in the end... should you choose to continue this with another one shot sequel...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 05:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... quite different and the characters in kagome's thoughts seem ooc... kinda sad... felt bad for kagome... really liked it... would like to see the thoughts of the others like inuyasha, miroku, sango & shippo during all of kagome's thinking... good job though... great work...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love to see where you would take this please continue
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