| "Splish Splash" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: 1andonly On: January 29, 2008 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was really funny. I liked how original the dialogue was, especially liked the last line. L is so cute! Good job! Thanx!
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Title: Funny!
Reviewed By: baronsaturday [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A lot of fun! Very funny. You kept them in character and that worked out well. It was well written and the grammar was very good. There are fanfics where if I see more than 4 mistakes, I refuse to go on, because it shows me that the author didn't care. No, a kiss was not needed. It would have been fun if L asked for one in jest to make Light really pissed off, but that's better left for another fanfic. I hope to read more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Shota-queen On: December 10, 2007 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap that was cool!!!!! you know if you put some kissing in there I would have liked it better.(hint-hint)
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Reviewed By: Katch_L [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny, I loved it!!-grins happily-
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Reviewed By: Project 0506 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why has no one reviewed this? I rarely even review anything and this one just demanded it. You captured L and Light perfectly. Yes... L would do that for a replacement cake. Ha! Perfect language and descriptions. Full 10s!
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