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| "Nephilim" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 05:46 CST
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i would love to help ya with the chapters ^^ and with the chapters, if their different from the sneak peek, then maybe start over..
| Reviewed By: Animekitty1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 23:27 CST
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While you seem to have a good idea in the works, you need to read over it before you post. I did notice quite a lot of typos and issues with capitalization. It also might help you gather some readers if you worked on your summary. A summary is a short presentation of not only the story itself, but also the author's skill. You want a good summary so you can leave a good impression. The current impression you have with the kind of summary you posted gives the idea that you either don't care about your story, are lazy, or simply rushed too quickly. I would also suggest trying to find a beta-reader to go over your work. Beta-readers are a great help. If you need any help don't hesitate to join the forum if you haven't already. It might look scary, but the people there really are friendly as long as you are polite and follow the rules. You may also contact me if you have any questions.
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