| "The Pain Of Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: PrincessCrakALakin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrness! update! plz? dont make me come over there! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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Reviewed By: Behemoth_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 22:30 EST
Comment/Review:
*guffaws and grabs her Vegeta plushie* Cool fanfiction! You must also update! Update or suffer the wrath of over obsessed reviewers!
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Reviewed By: Vicious G On: October 01, 2004 10:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoloutely love this story! It is just so very very wrong yet so very right! Also you have the characters all very different - no general stock characters here!
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Title: pain caused by not reading
Reviewed By: vegetarae On: September 30, 2004 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need you to update. i started readin this fanfic after i looked up other stories by you and now im addicted to both slave and pain of pleasure. on yer website chains and bonds is completed but this one i must read. i hope you update soon. im dyin. the way you write, its beautiful(a tear falls). keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 01:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahahha, I freaking love this story. I really, really hope you update this as soon as possible. This story is just so evil, I wish you could just post it all at once so I can just read and read until it's done! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!! I am SUFFERING HERE! hurrying and update, woman!
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Reviewed By: Sierra Falls On: August 29, 2004 02:56 EDT
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Its odd to see Frieza sulk like a little child. Warlord of the Universe indeed. Good story btw, and I hope to see more of it without the lag time in between that has been previously shown. Now get to work!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 29, 2004 00:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
good chappy, i realy feel the resentment bulma has for lil' trunks. its sad realy.
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: May 13, 2004 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word... wow... wait.. two.. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Auras On: February 24, 2004 18:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Is crying* HOW COULD YOU END IT! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 14:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah jealous a little heh. That is so cool Vegeta went super saiyan!!! I wonder what Bulma is going to do when she gets her senses back. Please update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 30, 2002 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eep! yay, bulama escaped frieza and stabbed the hell out of him too. ha ha!!!!!! go bulma!
hmm, vegeta sounds kind of okay, i hope he gets to her first.
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah Bulma stab that son of a bitch!!! It's kinda sad that Vegeta and Bulma aren't getting along but I hope they work it out then kill Frieza hahaha! K ummm.... no. C'ya for now. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 29, 2002 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting ideas. bulma fall in love with frieza? that's pretty gross, but if it's what you're into, then more power to you.
heh... ewww.
very good writing. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 12:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Run Bulma run!!!!! K anyways when Vegeta comes into the picture again I hope he saves BUlma's ass. Hopefully Chichi will make it too. Anyways I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so sad that Bulma ended up with Frieza. I hope that even though Vegeta really screwed up and made the biggest mistake of his life Bulma will still get together with him. Or at least keeps Trunks I mean it's her baby for god's sake. I really hope Vegeta does get together with Bulma cause come on a saiyan named Grape. Bulma is so much better. K now I'm going to stop my rant now. But please make this a B/V in the end. |
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