| "The Pain Of Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: Another favorite
Reviewed By: PrettyLintu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read slave first, and then reading this it almost feels like an alternative storyline - which is great. Loved the very last line!!! |
Reviewed By: not a member On: August 10, 2008 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great...as with Slave, I would love to see a continuation of this. This one could go even further, it has a different dynamic. I adore your writing style, and even though you're busy I hope you find time for this one as well.
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Reviewed By: Catie On: July 28, 2006 02:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Catie On: July 28, 2006 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
♥♥ I love this fic It is amazing!!! I wish you would make another part Of the story where it Describes her time with Vegeta!! ♥
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Reviewed By: Makota [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 15:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've signed the guest book, e-mailed, and am now offically replying...no, I am not stalking you :D just giving credit where it's due. This is a fantastic fic and is going in my fav's. I encourage you to finish this. Well done!
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Title: Why?
Reviewed By: Just a Reader On: September 02, 2005 02:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO! I hate you, you evil harpie... Or rather, I'm mad for the utterly fantastic clif hanger you left us (the readers) with. Any who, I hope you write more soon.... Hope you did't forget about this story...
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Title: A Special Edition request
Reviewed By: Mermaid Ninja On: June 26, 2005 16:04 EDT
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I think it would be nice if you made special versions of "The Pain of Pleasure" and "Chains and Bonds" where Gohan isn't dead. He could just be crippled.
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Reviewed By: PrincessCrakALakin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 16:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, AN UPDATE!! I guess miracles do happen... hehe, jk! ^.^() please don't take as long to update the next one... I won't make it...
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Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: April 16, 2005 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. if it wasn't for those times when slave was not updated i'd've never read this thing. great chap. i'm really sorry about your cat, i remember when i lost my kitty chelsea miller. so i know how you're feelin. and wiritng is a great outlet. so is chocolate chip cookies...... mmmmmm cookies.... ~alex~
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent...I loved the length of this chapter. Oh yeah, and about time you updated! I was wondering if you were still alive, lol. Anyhow, I just have one little thing to say about Bulma and Vegeta having intimate relations now after Bulma JUST gave birth...Bulma is going to be bleeding for quite a while because she just had a baby, right? Women aren't supposed to have sex for like what, a month or something after having a child? I'm not completely sure, but it will be interesting to see what you have to say next chapter...which you have better write/update soon!
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Reviewed By: PrincessCrakALakin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrness! update! plz? dont make me come over there! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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Reviewed By: Behemoth_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 22:30 EST
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*guffaws and grabs her Vegeta plushie* Cool fanfiction! You must also update! Update or suffer the wrath of over obsessed reviewers!
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Reviewed By: Vicious G On: October 01, 2004 10:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoloutely love this story! It is just so very very wrong yet so very right! Also you have the characters all very different - no general stock characters here!
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Title: pain caused by not reading
Reviewed By: vegetarae On: September 30, 2004 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need you to update. i started readin this fanfic after i looked up other stories by you and now im addicted to both slave and pain of pleasure. on yer website chains and bonds is completed but this one i must read. i hope you update soon. im dyin. the way you write, its beautiful(a tear falls). keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 01:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahahha, I freaking love this story. I really, really hope you update this as soon as possible. This story is just so evil, I wish you could just post it all at once so I can just read and read until it's done! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!! I am SUFFERING HERE! hurrying and update, woman!
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