"The Pain Of Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sierra Falls On: August 29, 2004 02:56 EDT Comment/Review: Its odd to see Frieza sulk like a little child. Warlord of the Universe indeed. Good story btw, and I hope to see more of it without the lag time in between that has been previously shown. Now get to work!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 29, 2004 00:30 EDT Comment/Review: good chappy, i realy feel the resentment bulma has for lil' trunks. its sad realy.
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: May 13, 2004 00:50 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: one word... wow... wait.. two.. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Auras On: February 24, 2004 18:40 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Is crying* HOW COULD YOU END IT! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 14:06 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yeah jealous a little heh. That is so cool Vegeta went super saiyan!!! I wonder what Bulma is going to do when she gets her senses back. Please update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 30, 2002 16:23 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: eep! yay, bulama escaped frieza and stabbed the hell out of him too. ha ha!!!!!! go bulma!
hmm, vegeta sounds kind of okay, i hope he gets to her first.
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 14:36 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yeah Bulma stab that son of a bitch!!! It's kinda sad that Vegeta and Bulma aren't getting along but I hope they work it out then kill Frieza hahaha! K ummm.... no. C'ya for now. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 29, 2002 12:52 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: very interesting ideas. bulma fall in love with frieza? that's pretty gross, but if it's what you're into, then more power to you.
heh... ewww.
very good writing. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 12:08 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Run Bulma run!!!!! K anyways when Vegeta comes into the picture again I hope he saves BUlma's ass. Hopefully Chichi will make it too. Anyways I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 12:40 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's so sad that Bulma ended up with Frieza. I hope that even though Vegeta really screwed up and made the biggest mistake of his life Bulma will still get together with him. Or at least keeps Trunks I mean it's her baby for god's sake. I really hope Vegeta does get together with Bulma cause come on a saiyan named Grape. Bulma is so much better. K now I'm going to stop my rant now. But please make this a B/V in the end. |
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