Reviewed By: laredith On: January 05, 2008 05:26 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: I liked your story overall. It had a good pace and originality. I did think that Bulma being a Sayian was a little bit of a stretch though. I liked your portrayl of Vegeta. Somewhere inbetween hardcore warrior and sexy-horny manbeast lol. Thumbs up!