| "Something More" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm... I wonder who Lauren could be? LOL What a great idea! Maybe I should think about replacing Bulma in one of my fics. lol Anyway this is really good. I don't know what you were talking about when you said your fics weren't any good. I really do like this. Can't wait to read the rest.-JB |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
heh i can really tell your more the kakkarot worshipper hehe ^^
a green VW bug? you shoulda made it yellow ^_~ heh |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
gohons so cute here ^^
Morning Amnesia..what keeps us all from waking up screaming..lol ( i read that in a dilbert cartoon,but bulma's small bout of morning amnesia reminded me of that) |
Reviewed By: reddrag80 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 08:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
THIS IS GREAT!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 01:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating. Cool that their going to the mall great place to go when your heart is feeling umm... bad. K anyways I'll be waiting for that next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was too damn short. Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Some advice:
Always start a new paragraph when the idea, POV, or person speaking changes. It's a bit OOC, but if you work on it I'll be checking back.
Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn I was hoping there was more than one chapter. Please update soon this is really good! |
