| "This Time Imperfect" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tori D On: October 23, 2009 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you updated,I read this fic last year and you only had a couple chapters up and it looked like you had abandoned it. Thanks for not abandoning this and please update again soon. Keep on writing your awesome story please.
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Reviewed By: Tori Davies On: July 17, 2009 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awesome I've been looking for a story like this for a while but the closest I got was a story called Monkey Moon. This story is amazing your great writer. THe spelling and grammer wasn't perfect but even published books the spelling and grammar aren't always perfect. I can't wait to read the next installment.
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Reviewed By: nevynslash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 20:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my! this is very good! i love the way you write the characters personalities. everyone is very close to being in character, if not there. and you use terms and names very well. though, someone without medical knowledge may not know what the lumbar is ;) keep writing. though i usually prefer goku/vegeta, the occasional vegeta/goku story is nice. especially if there is m-preg. i LOVE m-preg. so please finish. i beg you!!!
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Reviewed By: Day-chan On: February 26, 2009 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this sounds really promising. I look forward to seeing where it goes.^^
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Reviewed By: Anime1girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story. please. please. please. update. update. update.
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