| "Ryouga's Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkNotEvil199 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 04:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome...are you gonna update it anytime soon?
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Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
ARRRRRRGH! I've reviewed once before last year, but I missed seeing the second chapter on your deviant art site, and now it's not there anymore! PLEASE update and/or post that chapter up again!
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Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed it a lot. Please keep writing it, I want to know how it goes from here.
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Reviewed By: Elf From Space On: September 19, 2004 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Nicely believable characterizations, and a feasable plot. Please continue!
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Title: 2words: Knife Rape!
Reviewed By: Surosuke Joe On: September 06, 2004 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got my internet back, so yours is the first hentai fanfic I've gotten to read in a least a year, and I must say it's very, hmmm, vivid! Keep it up! Sore ja!
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Reviewed By: SuzumiAsagi On: August 26, 2004 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very awesome!! Please write more!!! I really enjoyed it and I hope you continue it soon.
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Reviewed By: hilome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 05:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Lemon for those who review!!
Reviewed By: Lady Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 11:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, so I'm reviewing my own fanfic, well not really... you see all you nice people on MM.org and AFF.net who have reviewed deserve a reward, and that is to get a sneak preview of the fanart for Chapter 2 of this fic, which you can find below (it's in 2 parts, but there's a link to part 2, and you REALLY want to see part 2!!) http: // www. deviantart. com/ view/ 8747219/ (copy & paste, remove all spaces)
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Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I rather enjoyed this little piece of lemon. Don't let the lack of reviews get you down, the fact that over 2400 people have read this first chapter should speak volumes to you on how good it is! Keep up the good work! -Doc
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Title: Got me interested.
Reviewed By: Sleepingbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that you don't think the ratings I gave are low, because that's not what I think. The places where I put seven's is where I think you need the most work. Originality is lower because it's not done, so I can't give a full assessment. It could go up or down as things progress. It is a good fic, and I want to read more. Usually I'm not so big on Lemons--or fics that aren't done yet. Most of the things I would suggest for improvement are nit-picky things, such as how fiance was spelled at one point. Good luck with finishing it, and I hope this provided some of the encouragement you need to continue (and you're right, this place sucks for reviews.)
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Title: 954874351
Reviewed By: mouthsofbabes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
We all know FF net sucks! Nice fic so far. Really, people enjoy it, they just don't reveiw. Don't get discouraged. * UPDATE *
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Reviewed By: Finally On: June 22, 2004 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that you have decided to continue this I saw it a couple of years ago on ffnet but nothing more was done i hope you continue it :)
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: rayd30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story. It was nice to see a humourous aspect to it, while not being overly critical to other characters (at least so far). Hope you continue it and hear from you soon! Ray
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