| "Motivation" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: yay this is awsome!!!.............alltough i like the hold kiba kag thing better
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 09:43 CDT
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^.^
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 17:20 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY! ^__^ XD Please write another one soon!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 15:09 CST
Comment/Review:
oh i love it oh i love it love it love it love it love it
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 15:31 CST
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Hee hee hee! I'm grinning from ear to ear! That was awesome! Perfect title. I loved the idea of Ino and chouji being an item, and her trying to set Shika up with gal after gal. I particularly liked the way Kag turned her (him) down and the reason she gave. It was just such a wonderful way to spark his 'motivation.' His thoughts on the matter were great! And I was just clapping my hands in glee when you threw out the "Hey Dreamer" line. ^_^ And I loved the way you described her eyelashes brushing his cheeks. *sigh* You turned me into a puddle of goo with this one, -- goo covered in warm fuzzies. LOL! Awesome shot!
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Title: motivation
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 09:08 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a grat story and u should up date soon bye
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