Reviewed By: malikbakurafan On: April 19, 2008 19:54 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I loved this story and yes i believe alot of people understood that Bakura only went there for Marik and used stealing as an excuss. There are some points were you messed up on grammer and your writing is alot better than most i've read so that's an up for you. By the way Marik in most storys is the yami of Malik. Other than that the characters names were right and the story was fun to read.
Reviewed By:Bad Ass [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 02:11 CST Rating(s):