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| "The love of an enemy." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: Ooooops
Reviewed By: Silvar On: November 13, 2009 10:19 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I am so completely sorry I spaced having this even up and got busy with school and being prego now and way to much drama anyway I will look around and see if I can find the other chapters I had finished and try to finish more. Looks like I'll have more time on my hands soon so hopefully. My deepest regrets that I left you all hanging for so very long. *The humble author*
| Title: interesting
Reviewed By: babygirladdy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 04:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
My problem with this fanfic is that firstly, the structure of the writing is off. It feels slightly rushed, slightly repetitive, not entirely well-put-together; the chapters are too short, they feel more like summaries and as someone previously said, "like a teaser", and it could use some definite editing. Another problem I have with this fic is the fact that it's been sitting here, unfinished, for over a year. Despite any "technical difficulties" it may have had, this was a truly original, GOOD idea, and it piqued my interest. Which isn't a good thing for me, honestly. I honestly feel that if someone doesn't know what is going to happen with their story, if life is getting in the way of writing it, or if they just lose interest in writing it, then they should just take it down altogether or wait to post it in its entirety when completed. The only good thing about this fic being "on hiatus" or abandoned for so long and still up is that I hope someone or the author themselves, at some point, picks this idea back up and continues with it. I would enjoy reading it were that the case.
| Reviewed By: NovalisBelle On: December 18, 2007 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD SO FAR!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
| Reviewed By: Hyoutan eiko On: December 18, 2007 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. interesting concept. looking forward to reading more.
| Reviewed By: badkittie2003 On: December 15, 2007 01:23 CST
Comment/Review:
It's a good beginning, mybe a little run together, especially in the dialogue, but good none the less. I believe I would enjoy this fanfic, if you decide to continue it.
| Title: interesting
Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
it does seem like it would be a good story but the flow was a little off and so it made it slightly confusing to follow who was talking to who and when and about what yet it still it a good beginning just maybe you come transition the change in the story smoother.. Nice Try though and look foward to what you do with it. DOnt give up!
| Reviewed By: Tobers On: December 14, 2007 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This first chapter presents its self well as a 'teaser'. Please continue, I very much would like to see where you are taking this.
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