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| "Ranma Crown Prince of Jurai" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 04:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad, I like most the plot points over all it is just a little sad the facts don't match up that well. It is like a bunch of idea's thrown together without the connecting dialog. Still a lot the idea's are nice, like Genma training Ranma up to 'slay demons' so he could kill the Master, and some how ending up being trained by the master is a better reason for Ranma to be a man whore then most fics. Bit disapointed how little action ranma actualy manages to get in the end the day, not to mention he had sex and climaxed and couldn't do anything about it? Considering all his abilities I would thought some super contraceptive ki technique be possible. More then anything this is more like a good rough idea of a fic, but needs rewriten into a final product.
| Reviewed By: A Reviewer On: January 06, 2008 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, MM has quite the review system, huh? Anydirection, pretty good story. Your style of writing is good for a crackfic, but still needs a bit of work, (unless this is just your crack/humorfic style) but it's highly enjoyable and distinctly amusing. The crossovers you've used are fairly unusual and fit remarkably well for the most part, so that's well done. Ranma the man-whore is more or less a cliche now, but it is still pretty damn amusing and I think you've written it very well actually. I also like the fact that you chose to stick him (of the senshi) with Rei, putting aside the fact that she was the easiest one to do this with (the dowry gag and all) most author's don't actually use her for much in their stories, especially in Ranma 1/2 crossovers. Bravo. The inclusion of the first generation Power Rangers was not only horrendously amusing, it's highly nostalgic for me, as that was actually my first encounter with live action Sentai shows and I actually watched it fairly religiously until they changed teams the first time way back when it aired originally. Kudos. Overally, it's been a highly amusing fanfic so far, and I really want to see what else you plan to do with it. Keep up the inspiring work. Later
| Reviewed By: Wolfy-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheheh. Some of this story cracked me up. Whether it was meant to or not I'm unsure. I like it a lot. Can't wait for the next installment to come out. One of the funniest I've read in a while :)
| Reviewed By: MoonstoneCabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 18:59 CST
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When I read a story about an Earth-born Juraian prince with awesome hyperdimensional abilities and who has suitors like Ryoko, Aeka, Washu, Sasami/Tsunami, Mihoshi and Noike, I want him to have the right name, TENCHI, HEAVEN AND EARTH, MASAKI, not Ranma. I don't want Tenchi written out of his own story so that Ranma can become him in everything but name. Why not do a story in which Ranma is Ranma and Tenchi is Tenchi without crossover power-ups or crossover matchmaking? Now THAT would be original. Tenchi having a prominent speaking part in a crossover with Ranma instead of being replaced with a say nothing, do nothing piece of furniture would be original too. Also, if a character in your story is an invincible hero who saves the day single-handed, his name should be Tenchi. He certainly proved to be invincible in "Tenchi Muyo." If you want Ranma to be the most powerful character in your story you shouldn't do crossovers with stories that have characters who could beat him to a pulp in under a second.
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