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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 03:25 CDT
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Man I love this story...XD....I wish you would update faster...hehe...ya know I'm such a hipocrite...well kinda ...I'm just now commenting...hehe... it has been awhile and you have update quite a bit it think.........I love how Kagome is going to be solving all their problems...Nauto's seel ...Lee's chara/Monk ki....that guy with the sword....It is dizzying trying to find out what the pairing sadly though...I just witht there was more Kagome to go around....hehe...but then again they can find girls that would be better for them...... and oh I laugh so hard when you did the shinigami thing with Sasuke.......and poor Kagome you can totaly tell she's got some seirous sexual tention...with all the hot guys that want her oh so bad.....I don't know how she can focus on training...but then again she is Kagome...and is incredebly dence in the area of love...even if she can sence their feelings....hehe......Remeber that image I sent you of the very very old Sesshoumaru...That would so suck for him...lol...................Oh and I can not believe you put Shippo inside of Naruto....when Kagome finds out she will be upset over the death of her kit...it so sad...but if I'm guessing right when you to get around to writing the next chater she will be finding out do to the extra training Naruto will be doing....sigh.........I hope you update soon though while I'm clearing out my inbox...lol...................Nyuka..XD
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 00:50 CDT
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You may want to reformat chapter 10-12. It shows as one great big unreadable chunk.
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Reviewed By: DemanFox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats good i would like to see kagome and kakashi togther, if not them her and garra
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 20:26 CDT
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Can't read this, Won't read this. This formatting is what I like to call Shit on a brick. I refuse to read this kind of formatting. Paragraphs and proper spacing are your friend. USE THEM.
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Title: Found In Sand
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Knight Dancer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish you would continue the story, it is most interesting. I hope you update soon because i think this is one of the best crossovers i have read and i don't usually get into them that much. i love to read fanfiction but not very many strike my interest. please do update soon.
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Reviewed By: Knight Dancer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that kakashi and kagome would make the best couple.
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Reviewed By: Knight Dancer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that kakashi and kagome would make the best couple
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Title: Good stuff
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I love this story and can't wait to see what happens on the training trip. I just wanted to offer some advice. Don't be upset or anything. I just want to help make your story the best it can be. ^_^ Make sure you read through the chapter before posting it to check spelling and the way it would sound to a viewer. Also, punctuation is very important. It allows the viewer to read the story the way you here it in your head. ex. "Kagome, I'm sorry I got mad. It's just that I... I like you." Just think about how you pause in the way you speak and use . , ; ... accordingly. Savy? Good. I really hope you update soon. You have a lot of potential. I was sad when I got to a really good part and it ended ;;;pout;;; -_-, Any who, good luck and have fun. Yours truly. IVX... ^_~
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Reviewed By: PLF94 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 09:20 CST
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this rocks i am so hoping that you update this!!!! i want to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 19:06 CST
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please update!! oh, pairing vote. sess/kag hehe...my fav. ;D FL
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 13:32 CST
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i'd say, kag/kiba, kag/gaara, or kag/naruto. very good so far. FL
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Title: OGF
Reviewed By: Oiche Ghealai Faolchu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great start. I can't wait to see what you come up with. It is a great introduction to a Naruto/Inuyasha crossover, the first one that caught my attention.
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Reviewed By: alonlygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god i love this and can you put tobi in here i just love him so very much oooo i got a sig muwahahahahahahaha oh and to people who think maru-maru-chan will be old think again when inuyasha was born he was probly over 1000 and dont lower class demons live longer than hanyous so that means that he might still be in his prime......oh and please update soon pretty please ------------------------------------------------- zetsu:tobi hit him three times and even Buddha will get mad zetsu:i dare you to say something else... deidara:I'll decide how you die! tobi:whats to decide? you'd just blow me up Zetsu:theres the third time. Deidara:Suffocation! *deidara sufficates tobi*
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Reviewed By: vampirekagomejc [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!!! Updated Soon!!
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