| "Wish I May" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 22:48 EST
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Beautiful, wonderful. I'm so glad you updated. I really should try to update too before I have to leave again. I was actually really excited. I was gone pretty much all of Jan and just started catching up on stuff that I missed and was so happy to see you had updated. It's such a wonderful story and it hasn't lost any of its enjoyment factor since I first started reading it. Looking forward to more. Good luck in all you do.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 03:36 EST
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It moves a little to quickly, and the writting ingeneral culd use some work. Well, that and, I dont know what it is but, Kagome just seems so tired. From the very beginning she seemed sleepy. Maybe its just me...
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 00:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! An update!!! It has beena long time!! It was a good one though. I had to read a fwe chapters just to get myself re-aquainted with the story. Please update sooner!! I really do enjo reading this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for more! lol!Please update soon! ^_~
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 07:37 EDT
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this is a great story so far, i cant wait to find out what happens next
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 03:47 EDT
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Poor Yusuke, so misunderstood. Hopefully Keiko will wait for his answer before beating him lol. Loved the chapter, especially the Kurama/Youko interactions. Youko is such a coniving little shit that I love him. I look forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 08:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really goood please up date sooon pleeeeeeeeeese
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 19:56 EDT
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update soon. i would like to know what keiko does to yusuke(poor guy). that and i want to know what happens between kagome and youko.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 09:28 EDT
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Yay, you updated! I like how Youko is being such a little shit and causing problems for Kurama. It's so endearing, their relationship *snickers*
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Reviewed By: missingnin0x0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 20:03 EDT
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nice chapter, it was really cool, too bad the dream wasn't real though, it would have been amusing to see how kurama and kagome would react if it was a real and unexplained encounter. So it seems as if youko is gaining control of their body, interesting. Sadly though this might make it so that kurama doesn't exist anymore. I'd miss him if that was to happen. No more calm calclated and innocent looking kurama! Oh how the world will suffer with his loss. And if he doesn't actually cease to exist then there is another tragedy which will strike kurama fangirls everywhere a heavy blow, poor kurama fangirls, his long luscious red locks are being replaced by youko's silver silk like hair. Luckily he might get kitsune ears, that'd be cute and a hassle to him, lol. I wonder how'd he deal with that, or how kagome would with it too. but a tail would most likely be even more problematic for kurama and kagome the only tail kagome could have possibly carressed is shippo's bushy tail, which probably doesn't feel quite as nice as youko's.... sorry got lost on a tangent... I look back at this review and think it's long, but I look at how much i can still write, still 2631 words, and it's huge. I wonder... has anyone ever used all 4000 characters? Crazy if they did.... Sorry, took another wrong turn. Please update again soon, your loyal reader missingnin0x0.
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Reviewed By: Kitana Li [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, so far so good. I JUST stumbled on to this fic today. and read through this one quickly. I like how you are having the characters take their time in getting to know one another. I eagerly await the next chapters in this story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 07:31 EDT
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lol. so youko is crushing on kagome, that's funny. and cute too. ;D FL
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 04:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice very nice
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i did not review the last chappie i really did like it bt your up dates are kinda slow so try to speed that up ok up date soon
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 02:43 EDT
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It was short but nothing wrong with that it's an update at least right? I wish I could actually force myself to do even that much *sheepish smile* but I like how Kurama seems to have this insecurity about his "'demon'" both quote and unquote. Youko is a part of who he is, it's him but at the same time he still hasn't really accepted the kitsune aspect of his true nature. It's cool. And now we have big-brother Sessho interfering even. Wah! What's gonna happen next. *sits down to wait eagerly*
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