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| "The Seneschal" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: Amazing.
Reviewed By: Menarie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2013 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly amazing. Please tell me you have somehow finished this story someway, somehow on another website...Something... There's no way you have discontinued such a perfect feel to this story. It was like a Novel... A perfect fan novel. I love it. Please tell me this is still alive somewhere. :( | Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 13:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. With every chapter, prequel, flashback, etc this story gets better and better. The most impressive is the characterization of Serenity and Selene. There's a good mix of maturity, innocence, and playfulness that you pull so very well. These last two chapters though not featuring Yumiko prominiently, she does make her prescence known. And lastly, my word, the world of the Silver Millennium is so complete and well thought out that you can't help but get lost in it. You've outdone yourself again Meat. Looking forward to more!
| Reviewed By: SailorAvalon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 05:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my word! I can not believe how truly amazing your story is. The flashbacks are a little confusing at times, but then again, I'm reading this at 3:00am. This is one of the best Sailor Moon fanfics I have read in a while. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long: It's kept me up way past my bedtime.
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 02:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Meatlips, I love you and I want to bear your children, in that freaky same sex kinda way Yumiko and Selene did. ;) However I'm not sure my wife would much approve of that, so I think this nice little comment of encouragement will suffice. On a serious note, I did notice a minor error here and there, but I wasn't reading all that closely. If you like I can point those out when I have time. Anyway, great beginning to an epic arc. Hopefully we'll see the storyline go back to the present as well after this flashback arc.
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 14:02 EST
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Damn... just damn. This story is tremendous. It's rich and colorful as well as graceful and yet so concise. How the hell do you do that? This is perhaps one of the greatest SM stories I've read and trust I've read my share. I'd put you ahead of other SM fanfic authors like Tim Nolan and Chris Davies. I urge you to keep going!
| Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: AngelOfTime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 16:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really well thought through story line. The main character seems to be your original one at the moment, I do not know if it will change in the future or if it will stay the same, but I am glad that a person did manage to think of what could have happened long before the Sailor Senshi's were reborn. The description was good and the Chapters were easy to read, something what a Reader appreciates. All in all I am glad to find a story which is not a crossover, but an Original thought. Hope to see more soon.
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 05:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in awe. This story is off to great start and you've done it doing one of the cardinal sins of fanfic writing, by focusing on an original character. Shame on you! ;p Keep going, I like where this is going and I already love Yumiko and it's only chapter 2.
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