Reviewed By: Yo Yo On: September 06, 2001 23:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This chapter is asbolutely disgusting. If I was a real rape victim, I would have been highly offended. 'He grabbed her skirt and panties and savagely Raped her' Oh, how sensitive! And we just had to make the R a capitol now, didn't we? There was little to no emotion and I highly doubt a rape victim could just stand up and run away right after the rape. It's too bad because you have something a lot of authors don't have: Grammar and spelling. Now get the writing skills to go alone with it and you might have a story. |
