| "Kisses: Mistletoe or No" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 02:51 CDT
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Hehe, very cute and very nice story. I liked how you portrayed the Hiei of five years ago. What a little smuck. I also liked how everything still worked out. I'm a sap for happy endings. My only question to you is, what happened to Inuyasha? He made that wish for her. It doesn't seem fair that he was just left to rot on some other tree, or more likely just cease to exist! Can you write a little blurb explaining that? Overall, great drabble, cute story, interesting twist. Keep up the good work! And don't feel rushed with BWM. We, of course, only accept the best. ;D Tchao! BoxingKing
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 19:18 CDT
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dumbassery?? a lovely word. that was sweet but you know i still prefer the puppy. >=P~ good story, exciting. ya know i won't read many authors' k/h stories except yours and very few others. ~ love ya, ginny
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 15:57 CDT
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Ha ha, fair IS fair after all! Whoever thought Hiei would kiss and tell? ^^
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 01:45 CDT
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Short yet sweet. Hiei, of course, would never be stoop so low as to cuddle. :D Definately liked the concept, but would have liked it a bit longer, just for my own amusement. :D ~BoxingKing
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Reviewed By: korrin On: March 11, 2008 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this one! even though its the shortest its now my favourite!
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Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:02 CDT
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Lolz. What a hypocrit...but in such a cute way!! Ahaha. I want a Hiei of my own...*pouts* aCutally, now that I think about it. If I can have anyone I want I desire a Scottish Laird who won't mind my frizzy highland curls...yeah..that sounds nice. He'll be bulky and very masculine but doting. and this has nothing to do with a review...? Therefore I desist and say...AS USUAL IT WAS SUPERBLY DIVINE AND CONSISTENTLY CUTE AS WELL AS BEING AWESOMELY FANTABULOUS!!!...Yeah. XD
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 18:22 CDT
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AH!!! It was so cute! Another! Another!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan(NLI) On: March 11, 2008 15:17 CDT
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Hehe! Short and sweet! What i love about your one shots is that they don't waffle or try to create a point- it's there, plain and simple (though wonderfully written!) I can just picture Hiei denying he 'cuddles'! Loved it!!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 17:52 CST
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Maybe it's just me, but were you writing from the viewpoint that Kagome knew exactly what he was doing and didn't mind a bit? That's kind of how it came off to me. If you look at it that way, it just makes the boys seem that much sillier! Also I'm awful and haven't found time to sit down and read the new chapter of BWM yet (busy busy, so I'm restricting myself to reading short things), but I'm looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 22:54 CST
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LMAO! That was great. Of course, just like you led up to, I figured the manipulation was Kagome and her sexy favors! I like "the red one" - teehee! And then there he was completely manipulating her. It would almost be a bit too devious if not for the fact that I had no idea. Hiei is great. :D I would love to know what he said to Hojo. :D This was excellent, as always. And I think this is more along the lines of a drabble, although I would have no idea what necessarily determines drabble or not. The only thing I would work on was the introduction - maybe introduce the scene a bit more, what Yusuke and Kurama were doing there, etc. Otherwise, awesome! Your short stories crack me up! Also, nice disclaimer! ^_~ Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 21:11 CST
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This one was inspired. I thought it strange for him to be so susceptible to her playing him. How utterly sneaky of him.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 01:23 CST
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OMG! That was funny! I loved it! I laughed the whole time I was reading it! AH! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 11:19 CST
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Hehe!loved it! Especially Kurama's finishing line! Hiei is that damn sneaky!! You're doing great with these oneshots, they're just lovely
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi(nsi) On: February 26, 2008 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eh, i wouldnt call it so much suffering as drooling and waiting in anticipation for the next installment... these drabbles are so awesome...its a very nice way to wait for BWM. i bet Kagome knew what Hiei was doing, and just played along...or maybe she really thought she was getting the best of him...lol either way, that was a good drab
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 22:44 CST
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Hehe! Favorite parts: Kouga mistaking chocolate for a proposal, and Kagome delivering chocolate to future and the past Inuyasha, Sesshy, and Shippou! :D Keep up the good work, can't wait for your next chapter!
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