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| "Love for Him" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: you said it!
Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ditto with what lil6ter said... that was complete poetry, even if it wasn't supposed to be! it explains Kagome's feeling perfectly! good job! :DDD
| Reviewed By: lil6ter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 15:12 CST
Comment/Review:
*Sniffle sniffle* so sweet. I almost felt that with the way you formatted it, that it was poetry. It was very sweet, but at the same time, kinda sad. The words that you used really helped show Kagome's inner feelings. It was emotional in my opinion, and that is something that allot of people have a hard time with. You have no idea how hard it is to get some people i know to use emotionally language, but you really did a nice job with it. I really liked it. Keep writing. I think that it is great and that you should not stop there.
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