| "The Nameless Hero." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Good Begining
Reviewed By: SKEEVE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story shows alot of inagination and talent. It flows well and keeps you wanting to know what's going to happen next. There are 2 parts of the story that is a little confusing to me. The First is the flashback where Kakashi is remembering when he first heard of the masked hero, and the appearance and disaperence of Konoromohu. While I realise the are simply devices for plot advancment, they seemed to have been put in as an after thought. This story has alot of potential and look forward to seeing more in the future.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover (not logged in) On: January 18, 2008 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! i liked all the chaps!!!! well please update soon!!!I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT WAT HAPPENES NEXT!!!! UR AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic it's very interesting. so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
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