| "The Hyuuga Swap" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a style of writing that's better than what I would call "good". The way you worded it, I was just hurting--all the way to my finger tips. But it was a good kind of hurt. I stayed up all night, and read this fanfic in its entirety. I went to bed, got ALMOST 5 hours of sleep. And now I'm going to read it again (I've been awake for only an hour). You've got me hooked.
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Reviewed By: tama-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 00:36 CDT
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You get +1,000 points for using the phase, "The best thing since sliced bread." Congratulations. And you also get love and fans for the fact that plot is more important than pairing or sex. Thanks for the first chapter! :]
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter. Really looking forward to what happens.
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Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Neji looked at home here. He matched the environment so well, he seemed like just one more piece of it. One piece to this secluded little world between four walls, distanced so from everything else... like it was a different universe. What would it be like to be included in it? And could there even be space for him? A little Naruto-shaped cut-out? Or was it like a well-oiled clock - self-sufficient and running smoothly, to which he would be nothing more than a monkey-wrench in the gears if added into the works? It was something to think about." i love the way you write, it's almost poetic. i can't wait fo you next update. :]
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH! You finally got them together. Well done. Now I'm really looking forward to seeing what the fallout/consequences are. Please write soon. I really am enjoying this fic. Thanks for writing. Later.
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Title: AHHH I LOV
Reviewed By: lovie On: February 16, 2008 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love this fick more than anything!!!! i am like in total love with neji...maybe cuz my boyfriend is Japanese and has long hair too..minus the gray eyes..(and the fact that he likes girls) you have picked up on their personalities and molded them to work for the story..keep it up and update soon..and manke more neji fics!!!
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Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing. so suspenseful and funny! your amazing my frined. :F i'm so veryyeveryerverye excited for the next update. ^_________^
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 17:36 CST
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OMG! Neji's getting a little fiesty. Your story is good. Continue to write more. Thanking you in advance. Ciao.
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 16:59 CST
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hahaha! That was funny! Anyway, I just read the first chapter and I have to say it was really funny with the Irish Coffee and everything! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Now how are they gonna get past Hinita? Can't wait to see what you come up with as their "escape" rout. Great chapter! Thanks for writing. Hope that there will be more. SOON!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Shorty_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
om my gosh i love this story..its so hot and the story line keeps me reading..keep it up and update soon
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 15:22 CST
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OMG! Write more this story is too good to be true. Please write more. Thanking you in advance. Ciao.
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Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so basically, theres no other way to say this. i think im in love.\with your sotry. is a perfect combination of awkward young love and sarcasim. i low-ve it. :]
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is really good. Love the oblivious Naruto. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! I love Neji/Naru fics! Keep writin'! Wanna know what will happen!
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