| "Finding Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: March 22, 2008 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was so cute! You depict Red as just being so innocent I just can't help but feel my heart getting all warm. Ok well over all your story was 100% enjoyable. Very entertaining and quite funny at times especially with all those crazy fan girls. LOL I must admitt though that the actual pacing of the story seemed just a tiny bit rushed...but then again considering the actual plot and subject matter...it can be said that it could be that this is rather expectable. Either way shadowphantomness you have still live up to your standards! It was definitely a wonderful read! Good luck and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: March 22, 2008 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! That whole bare chested Lance scene caught me a little off guard there but I can tell that Red is starting to like him! One chapter left...wonder what's going to happen.
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Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: March 22, 2008 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great battle scene! I still feel bad for Red though. I hope that bitch that dumped him just because he didn't kiss like her last boyfriends burns in hell! If ever there was something to say, I'd say she was the bad kisser! LOL! Awesome chapter!
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Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: March 22, 2008 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...poor Red! That was cute when Lance tucked him into his bed. Pikachu pajamas! Lol! I can just imagine that!
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Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: March 22, 2008 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha! How funny! I would never strike Red as one to want a girlfriend! Great start to the story! Irvin Z.Martinez
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