| "Raindrops" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: the Black Jaguar On: February 01, 2008 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh, my god that was precious. *squealing in background* dude. that's really well-written. mostly when i look at those types of fictions it's like...well it sucks. but this time it was like i was actually there!!!!! keep up the good work! keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: blaze417 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
wonderfully written keep it up
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Reviewed By: princessjeza On: December 30, 2007 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was just beautiful!! it really warmed my heart! You did a amazing job! I love ichiruki! ^_^
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 02:55 CST
Comment/Review:
ill call it chessyness, but it made me smile...rhymes are good though...have a happy holidays to you.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was nice, a little bit over sentimental, but still very cute at the same time. :D I really enjoyed the poem at the very end, you had a nice rhythm and rhyme scheme and the line I particularly enjoyed was the one about the girl being a "work of art." This was a good fic in terms of sweetness and you did have very nice grammar--always a plus. And of course you wrote for IchiRukia which makes you a hero in my book! ;) Kudos and keep writing!
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