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| "Appreciation" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 01:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job-great enough for me to recommend this fic to others, something I never do. I really enjoyed this because on some levels I feel that the series has glossed over the trama Naruto went through, and unfairly turned Sasuke into the goldenboy. I liked Recca because he's parinoid, and his extremeness is possibly his weakness, but he's smart to the point where he's almost too smart. Your knowledge and sense of humor have been great and my head is spinning from all of the plot directions that you've added to this story. I'm also happy that you didn't discriminate against any characters (though I was slightly afraid you were going to be biased to Sakura and Sasuke at first). I can't wait to see how the fighting styles and techinques are going to change( hint please continue writing this story), esp. for Naruto and Sakura. I will ask that you consider breaking this into a multichapter (I started reading this the day you published this and finished today) Please also try not to overpower anyone- a feat that might be useless since Recca is into overkill, so don't recklessless overpower anyone.
| Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 02:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for writing this. - Clearly you did thorough research for both the world and the individual characters, it is plainly obvious that you know this world -- and how it works -- backwards & forwards. That being said, I truly enjoyed the views and opinions of your central POV character more than anything else. I can't wait to see how having such an interesting and intelligent instructor will change the entire story of Team 7.
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