Title: Well... Reviewed By: Mistressmeows On: January 15, 2008 21:24 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Funny, yet to the point well done. What more can I say then please write a continuation of the story I want to read some action on it and I wouldn't mind a flashback on the event of the stealage and what rukia might do after she finds out what renji was doing in her underwear selves. Maybe you can do another chapter where ichigo does something as well. Just some suggestions to keep in mind. I enjoyed what you have at the moment anyways so up to you.
