"Bonds of Survival-OVA" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: SilentPredator [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 19:54 CST Comment/Review: Much better. It would have been nice to see them go through some more struggles before being saved by Misato. Maybe having to survive through the harsh winter that was mentioned or something else along those lines. I'm uncertain of one thing though. The story is listed as completed, yet the last chapter (7) mentions another chapter (8). It's not clear if the story has ended or not.
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Reviewed By: eva maniac On: October 20, 2002 15:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: you should read this fic, its tight!! |
Reviewed By: *god x hunter* On: October 11, 2002 10:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fanfic,keep it up |
Reviewed By: andres ocasio On: September 10, 2002 17:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: your fanfic, it is so great, thi is one of the best fanfic i have read please update soon i can'twait to see what happens next |
Reviewed By: The Australian Shinji Ikari On: July 16, 2002 12:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OK I'LL TRY TO EXPLAIN MY REASONING...
YOUR FIC WAS REALLY INTRIGING(JUST A BIG WORD I USE TO SOUND IMPORTANT)AND COOL HOW IT'S ABOUT THREE FOURTEEN YEAR OLDS STRUGGLING FOR SURVIVAL WHILE FORMING A RELATIONSHIP. |