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| "Christmas Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: ILANA On: March 13, 2008 21:29 CDT
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Great, write more Gh/Vi. You suck at G/OC because the very concept sucks monkey balls. If you areed about your readers, you wouldn't do it.
| Reviewed By: G/V fan 4ever On: March 11, 2008 14:28 CDT
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Oops. Please don't interpret that to mean that I want Pan INVOLVED or something. Pure G/V. I just wanted you to get the time right.
| Reviewed By: G/V fan 4ever On: March 11, 2008 14:27 CDT
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Look, again I don't agree with any G/OC; there's simply no reason for it. You seem like a reasonable guy, please don't do it anymore. I have a request please. Could you write a real hot lemon between Gohan and Videl during the GT age? So, there's Pan an everything. I'd also like for you to do a multi-chapped lemon G/V fic. I know similar plots have been doen before, but can you have Chichi (whoever) bet that Videl can't abstain from sex and so she endeavors to prove them wrong? A sex-hungry Gohan after his mate, what could be hotter? Please writ it differently from your other lemons. It seems the sam type of foreplay and eventual copulation. You could try different stuff like I see you seem to adhere to in your other fics (which I dislike because of the pestiferous G/OC elements). Try it. Thanks.
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