| "Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess...who is lazy and didn't sign in. On: January 18, 2008 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH How Good I can't wait for next time either. I wish you would write more about this...as you can tell i am a greedy reader. but how can i not be when the story is as good as this one? I love the idea that yeah we fight all the time right now and for fifty years i was pinned to a tree...but we are youkai and hanyou, so that is like no time at all. With a relationship like that i could so understand Sesshoumaru not being pleased with the necklace kagome put on inu...like a challange to his claim. Either way wonderful story, i enjoyed every moment of it.
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Reviewed By: sweetmelodyofchoas On: January 01, 2008 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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This story was really cute. I really enjoyed it. It's just too bad Inu-chan didn't get to suck sesshy's cock. I am such a sesshoumaru fangirl. I wish I were in Inuyasha's positions.Um then again maybe not. Anyway great story!
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Reviewed By: Hirumakage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully done! Twisted in a beautiful way. You have the personality of Inuyasha down perfectly, without making him into an idiot. I like this story. You really have talent! I can't wait till part two.
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Reviewed By: sienta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 12:13 CST
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You hit the nail on the head. Inuyasha is definitely a much deeper individual than people give him credit for.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: December 30, 2007 00:07 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue. I want to find out if they're in an actual relationship
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Title: Knockout
Reviewed By: jenerik_brand [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the way it should be! This is sick, sexy, and smart. Your first person Inuyasha is amazing. The way you explain the characters through his eyes is textbook. People should read this fic to see how it's *done*. There is a god because you're writing more. WOW
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