| "Someone to watch over me..." Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: unknown22 On: July 26, 2002 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job..nicely written...cant wait till you update! |
Reviewed By: xtraruffrider@aol.com On: August 17, 2002 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful!*wipes tear from eye and claps at same time*. MORE PLEASE! IM BEGGING YOU! JUST TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED AT THE FUNEREL AND ILL LEAVE YOU ALONE! i didnt know nappa had green eyes and was he working alone? this happens when you right a good fanfic, you get tackled with questions. you probalbly already know that cause your obviously not a beginner. that's enough ass kissing for today. tell me if you put up more!! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 24, 2002 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I lost you for a bit...very pleased to find you again...
another great chapter...you have me completely bamboozled...as to who the killer really is, but I'm starting to get suspicious of everyone...lol
even the rookie...
okay, so I'm tired. lol
looking forward to the next bit...
Jada : ) |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 11:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yayyy!!!!!!!!! I loved that chapter, it was so awesome. I liked Goku cooking his snack over the open fire, that was silly. |
Reviewed By: MistressAlexa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 15:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Piccolo just loves to be a pain in the ass in his own subtle way. Goku should have roasted Marshmallow in the fire. *he he* Well, Jessica working for them will be interesting. Jessica sparring with them will be very interesting. How long before Vegeta drops her to her ass?
Only one thing: If she's no longer on the police force, then she wont have access to the same information the police does. Unless of course she were a hacker too. *whistles innocently*
Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait for more. You know I'm always glad to help. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SCORE! Tons of new updates! You rock! Once again, I find myself EXTREMELY enjoying this story. I'm so recommending it to all my friends, and I'm definately plugging you in my next updates! Keep up the great work! (P.S. that Piccolo training Marshmallow was really cute!) |
Reviewed By: Kui On: July 08, 2002 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love yer fic so far! also, i have just opened a dbz fic gallery, if you would care to submit this or any of your fics! you can see the site at http://kui.s5.com/home/, or email me at sailor_kui@yahoo.com. i accept any and all types and ratings! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, all it takes now is at least two more chapters...or was it one? hmm..anyway, i'll be up to date and reviewing like crazy by then |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful story, really well done :) I love the cat thing, that's funny, and you've done a great job slowly building Bulma and Vegeta's relationship. So many people rush it, but you are doing an excellent job! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: OujoNoSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Please update it, and you'll be sure that i'll read it! I at first thought the guy might be Goku...but he's too innocent and is usually around and he wasn't there during the explosion right? Plus...Veg could sense his Ki...hmmmm, a real mysery. Maybe it's yamcha? He's pretty weak and maybe he just got drunk or sumthin. Maybe got drunk? Udnerstatment of the century eh? Well, hurry it up, I'm DYING to know who's out to get Bulma (Poor Mrs. Briefs.... I liked her :( ) |
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee hee! I really like your fic! Very good... I haven't seen anything like it before, like the way the characters are... yea! I know I'm confusing! LOL! But at least I know what I mean, right? *gets confused look on face* Uh... Bye!
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
all the chapters are great, i doubt i reviewed on FF.N and if i did i was kitten..sorry about that. Just thought i'd tell you that i love your story and can't wait for you to get to the chapter i left off on. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: July 02, 2002 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this on FanFiction. It's a shame it went down...agian. Any who, I like very much, and I can't wait to find out who the killer is. I'm really stumped. I thought it was 17 or 18, but I guess it isn't. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story, and how your not compeletly changing Vegeta's character =^.^= Please update soon, I'm hoping for a hentai chapter . |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
wonder who the blonde is...probably another famous person..could be the killer though. |
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