| "Someone to watch over me..." Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: Aarg!
Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY LORD AND LADY! You f*cking b*itch! I love you! That was one of the greatest stories I have ever read in my life. You had me screaming in horror, hyperventilating from the suspense, and squealing at every little romantic thing. I want to murder you for killing Geta of! That's sooo wrong. I ACTUALLY CRIED! I have cried a total of three tomes in my life and your damn story made m cry! Well, your storie was absolutely incredable! I'm gonna go read the sequel now. Cya!
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Reviewed By: Mariah Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,gurl! Wussup? Anyways, I know on ff.net you had WAYYY MORE REVIEWS THEN THIS! I was reading it, but I guess I got pre-occupied, and missed alot of chappies!! lol. I'm gonna read the sequal wheneva ya bring it out. |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
You can't possibly be serious. All the work you've put into this story, and this is how you think it should end?
I hope your joking.:::props up fake smile:::
Jada |
Reviewed By: qwewqeqwe On: August 16, 2002 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! I WANT A SEQUAL! |
Reviewed By: Juu-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 02:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT!? You can't do this to me! NO, I need to know what's gonna happen.. *wails loudly* Please don't leave us hanging like this! BTW, excelent fic ;) |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 02:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
OH COME ON!!just one more chappie!?!?I have so many questions that need to be answered..u just cant make that the end!!I'll die if I dont know what happened to Vegeta!And what about Bulma?If Vegeta really dies..how will she take it?Its not fair..tear...WE NEED TO KNOW!This is an awesome story, but the way it ended seemed so cliffhangy-ish.it would be really cool of u to put an extra chapter out there for us..but if not..i guess we all suffer..lol.Ill be checking in case u do!bye |
Reviewed By: MistressAlexa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Vegeta playing the piano... Truly inspiring. I would have never thought of that. You think of all the wonderful things my mind can never conjure.
I'm surprised that Shin didn't say anything considering our recent conversations. What, did Blaze wear out his tongue already? -.o
Definitely an excellent chapter. |
Reviewed By: Chichoie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please Update soon!!!I just finished reading Chapter 52!!! |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome fic!plz update soon!i think we all want to know who the stalker is!!i started thinking yamcha...but then he said he hired someone plus he got killed so...im out of ideas!and im glad ur keeping everyone in character. i dont like when ppl change them too much. hope to read more soon. love this story!till then..bye! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this ^^ what actually drew me in was the artists request because i thought it sounded like a cool pic for me to do. In anycase im really getting into this. Im off to read a bit more of it!
Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: lovegoddes23 On: July 26, 2002 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good story...but when does it end? i am going crazy, i have managed to read all of this in less than one day...51 chapters! and it just doesn't end! |
Reviewed By: unknown22 On: July 26, 2002 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job..nicely written...cant wait till you update! |
Reviewed By: xtraruffrider@aol.com On: August 17, 2002 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful!*wipes tear from eye and claps at same time*. MORE PLEASE! IM BEGGING YOU! JUST TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED AT THE FUNEREL AND ILL LEAVE YOU ALONE! i didnt know nappa had green eyes and was he working alone? this happens when you right a good fanfic, you get tackled with questions. you probalbly already know that cause your obviously not a beginner. that's enough ass kissing for today. tell me if you put up more!! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 24, 2002 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I lost you for a bit...very pleased to find you again...
another great chapter...you have me completely bamboozled...as to who the killer really is, but I'm starting to get suspicious of everyone...lol
even the rookie...
okay, so I'm tired. lol
looking forward to the next bit...
Jada : ) |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 11:25 CDT
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Yayyy!!!!!!!!! I loved that chapter, it was so awesome. I liked Goku cooking his snack over the open fire, that was silly. |
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