| "Rescued by Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 05:39 CDT
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shesshomoru kicks ass bitches!!! yeah! rin ends up with him,cuz no matter how sweet ichigo is, he's going to find a deomoness and fall in love with her so ~nah~ to all u shesshomoru haters!
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Reviewed By: blum On: April 17, 2008 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eating popcorn all dazed* now this is proper entertainment people!! XDXD!! good job!! and i love Ichigo;hawt hawt *i want my own!* >.<
Anyway, keep posting! oh, and i'm not surrently signed in; but by:inu_inu_luvluv
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I loved the chapter i await the next ;-)
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy this a lot!! it's really good and quite well written! More of this please; can barely wait *anticipation on it's highest*!! Now i don't get it howcome only 8 reviws have been sent here for now, this is really good, so pay no mind to the count. We others love this!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I want more please I really want to see where you take this.
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Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 01:00 CDT
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You are ery mean leaving peope there........ Poor Rin and then YAY she remembers!!!!! Nice chapter.....Keep writing yadda yadda Draca
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 05:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon I know you just did on the 8th but I would live to read more please thank you.
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Rin! Killed by wolves, brought back to life, putting up with Jaken's crappy attitude, kidnapped, enslaved, then raped by some fire demon asshole. Geez, girl needs to catch a break! Maybe now that the do-nothing duo are back, she can rest a little easy. Yeah, just a little pissed at the lack of action by Sesshy. But I am sure there will be a good reason, eh?
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Title: Here's what you gotta do!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 01:38 CST
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You have to write a really crappy chapter and then at the end say you won't write any more chapters until you get say 15 reviews! If people really like the story they will write a review. Then you can remove the crap chapter and post a better chapter. Try to make the flashbacks a little shorter. Otherwise it can be quite startling if you are suddenly back in present time, and you can't remember why you were given a flashback. Love Draca P.S. If you write another chapter try and send it to me before next Wednesday. Because I won't be able to proof read it until Friday otherwise.
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Reviewed By: IXIWineIXI [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story but we are all 2 lazy to leave a feedback. don't think we aren't reading your story.
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 05:04 CST
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Great idea!!! I can't wait to see where you will take this story!!! Just pomise me one thing?? Don't leave the story unfinished!! even if the ending is crummy, and you have grown to hate please finish it!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime crazed On: January 01, 2008 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow nice work. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!
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