| "The Sweetest Sacrifice" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 13:55 CST
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so, the personalities are experiencing some spark, stings a little until the electricity flows... >=] ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 04:37 CST
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I'm enthralled by this story. Not sure if that is a good thing... don't really want to be camped on yet another writes doorstep begging for scraps... however I find myself needing to know what will happen next. So please keep up the fast updates that you have been doing.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... inuyasha & kagome should try to get along more... and hope that kagome will learn more about her powers... she was caught by kagura twice and by sheer luck (i think) she was able to get away... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 00:09 CST
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everybody's personalities are quite 'in character' and the story is progressing right along. i see that you are assembling the pieces and the players now to find out how everything fits together and moves. so very exciting! ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Lilia On: January 03, 2008 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This new story is really intriguing me. I want to know what Inuyasha's mission is and I'm kinda surprised how quickly Kagome threw him out; she's usually a little more quick to forgive. I guess we'll see in the next chapters. Thanks for posting, I'm really looking forward to reading the next scenes.
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Reviewed By: PhoPoe On: January 02, 2008 05:39 CST
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Hey, I'm already hooked. I love how Inuyasha's a bit scared and unsure, but still his rude, arrogant self. I really like how you're keeping up with the characters, and your writing is good as well. Only a couple of grammar/punctuation problems, but other than that, it's great. I'm looking forward for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lilia On: December 31, 2007 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great opening. I'm really enjoying your take on the universe. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 03:30 CST
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i like this. it's a shame that the taijiya don't know that like humans, there's good and bad in all sentient creatures and that in their indiscriminate slaughter is senseless. i am interested in seeing where you are going to take this. ~ thank you, ginny
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