| "A Bundle Of Wonder . . . Or So I Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Eudave [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2015 22:04 EST
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Plz update soon
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Title: Me likey! :)
Reviewed By: Kiraki On: March 06, 2011 12:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good, not very original with the plot, but this is a first; Naruto finding a baby before he's in a relationship. Any who, I vote for SasUKE, because I think he's a better match for Naruto. |
Reviewed By: RavenRise On: June 14, 2008 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to finish the story, just the fact energetic naruto has a cute looking baby and aww.
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Title: GAARA!
Reviewed By: Sheenio On: April 02, 2008 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW! This story is so kawaii! ^^ Oh I wanna vote for Gaara! ^_~ I mean well....wouldn't it be cute? Hmmm....oh yeah is he even gonna be in this one (wasnt paying attention 'til she saw poll results) ?? Aww, imagine Gaara trying to help Naru-chan and acting all fatherly at day.....*evil grin* and much MUCH more at night! :3 lol ignore me! ^^
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Title: Well....
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was kinda hoping that it would have been Neji... I have seen far too many Naruto and Gaara stories, don't get me wrong, I like them. But I am looking for something alittle more.... different, I guess. And your story is different, I like it. As for the two guys... I have a guess of who they are, but I am not sure just yet of who. Maybe another chapter and I will know with 100% sureness... is that a word? Any way. please keep up the good work, and can't wait to hear more.
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 19:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
Cool, I really like it. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: anonymous... On: March 31, 2008 19:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey love your story and I vote for a Kakashi Garra & Sasuke Threesome!
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Reviewed By: Kacorait [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
need more so adorabul
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Title: Aw!
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 14:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I am enjoying it and at the moment I think the pairings aren't needed just yet. Surprises are always good, and for one I love them. Please continue on with the story! Hope to read more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Demi Wolf On: February 21, 2008 03:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I belive the still of writing is great because it's easy to read. I cant tell you about spelling and grammar because I suck at that. I think it creative because I have never read one so fasinating. Plus I think you should put naruto with Kakashi, Gaara and suske because it just seems more creative that way. Personally it already sounds like he would end up with Kakashi
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Reviewed By: Raven77 On: February 13, 2008 12:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it!!!! I vote would have to be UKE Sasuke
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: February 13, 2008 12:38 EST
Comment/Review:
My vote is: Sasuke
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Reviewed By: gaarasluver1 On: February 03, 2008 22:16 EST
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great story!!! :DDD i love it, i cant wait for the next chapter :] and well u dun have to choose this but in my opinion i think naruto shuld get put with sasuke! :]
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl021 On: January 31, 2008 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i just have to vote for both sasuke and gaara cuz i love both!!! although gaara is my favorite. anyways update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: honeysuckelvine On: January 23, 2008 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story itself but I wish that the author had fleshed it out a bit which would have lenthened the chapters and eliminated the rushed fealing. When I have the same problem, I wright it first, then go back and reread the chapter. I find myself adding detail adn whole paragraphs of things seem to make themselves happen. As for the pole... KAKASHI RULES!!!!!! Whole sights are dedicated to the pairing and moste of those fans only realy surch on those sights so you might not get the interest that you would if you cross posted.
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