Reviewed By: Desert Bloom On: January 28, 2008 15:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Great fic. I've always wondered how long Yagyuu had played tennis, because it seems like the rest of the regulars have played for years, and he's been playing golf. So to make the regulars, he has to be pretty good. I liked that they had seen each other at their worst, because it makes it more realistic that they would be able to work things out. The line about them spending time with each other has Niou would spend most of his time with Niou and vice versa. I assume you mean Yagyuu for the second Niou. Keep writing.
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