| "More Than Anyone" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tears streaming down face. That was deep. I hope u decide to make a third chapter because i want it to end happy i now thats alot to ask but the heartrenching feeling you get in death sucks
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sits here with tears running down* HOLY CRAP!!! it fricking hurts just reading it T-T how did you wrote that!? anyways yea im hoping you would a 3rd chapter.... seen that you did had it under romance.... bring us a romantic ending... please T-T
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Reviewed By: ghoulgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very well written. it's so sad how kagome gave her life like that. are you going to continue writing this because the cliffy ending was good, but it seems like it needs more and this a fantastic story
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 19:13 CDT
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you didn't kill the puppy, he lost his love!! don't the mythological deities periodically reward self sacrifice? a bittersweet thing this chapter *sniffle* i do enjoy your stories. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 18:49 CDT
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is kagome ok? please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*applauds wildly* This is simply amazing! The imagery, the emotions, the intense picture you created in his "awakening"....you simply must continue this!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 09:34 CDT
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So glad to see you're back! And writing, no less. Very nice chapter here, love the imagery and emotions. You haven't lost your touch.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 01:48 CST
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so you aren't going to kill the puppy?!? i don't do angst very well and it looks like yasha's not going to make it *sniffle*...
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Title: more than anyone
Reviewed By: Vampire liaison [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 15:01 CST
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The fact that you didnt tell us in the end left the whole thing up in the air. if the fic was going to continue, then a cliffy would be fine, even a good choice, but considering that you do not intend to elaborate, then it leaves the whole story sounding unfinished, as though something distracted you and you never wrote an end. i think you should put up another chapter with the resolution.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 04:37 CST
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Aaaack, the angst! Well, you have my approval. Love the emotion in this, the desperation. Timing and pacing just right, no rushing or dragging. But the questions it begs! Does he die? What of their friends? And if he/they are dead, what of the shard hunt, and Naraku? Def potential to continue, but also good to leave as an open ended fic, to make you think. Another fine piece!
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