| "One Day at a Restaurant" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shocking! especitly wen i read the.and i quote"will u marry me" part. i felt like i was going light headed and- ~F.G -ur always lightheaded. u dont have a brain. ~ tba- -_-* ignoring that...it almost made me fall out of my seat. it rox! but.. its sad its only a one shot. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 08:10 CST
Comment/Review:
This was really nice and not rushed. Even if Sesshoumaru was just a bit OOC it´s alright, how else would this work if you don´t want to have a shallow story. I hope to read more of your stories.
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