| "The Good Willed Tyrant" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: make ti yaoi
Reviewed By: Roxs On: February 04, 2009 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I say the bestest pairing ever made in the anime world id sasake and Naruto FOREVER and Ever
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Reviewed By: Roxs On: February 04, 2009 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well I just have one thing to say::: What r u gonna put up the NEXT chapter!!! This is good, and good is good enough please post up the next chapter
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this new story, but don't forget the Son's Legacy. Update both soon please.
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Reviewed By: xenmosh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude this is greatyou have to keep it up
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Reviewed By: Interestedfeller On: February 08, 2008 21:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice development for Naruto. The tears explain well that he is still human. However you should progress and make it so he gradually loses tears as he has to become a dictator for all.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Phule [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
saw a few grammar errors but over all good. my suggestion is put it in Word and spell/grammer check it before submiting. Like the story, its a great new idea, keep up the good work :)
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Reviewed By: snowecat(not signed in) On: February 03, 2008 20:54 CST
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Your spelling and homonym abuse is severe, but not as bad as some. To become a dictator is a new concept in the time-travel ideas. I like this much better than some of your other work. Hope you keep going. This is worth persuing.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree that Hinata is still the best pairing for Naruto. Though Hinata herself msy end up being heartbroken that Naruto lost all of his youthful fire that inspired her to improve herself. Besides, Hinata may end up healing a few inner scars that Naruto has gained throughout the years. There was never any form of love interest in Naruto's previous life that was mentioned. And now Naruto has a year before he graduates therefore he can focus on getting Sasuke to lose the cold exterior he has. He may also be able to help Sasuke with gaining the Sharingan early. Sakura could be assisted alongside a few others with medical techniques and Neji could lose his hatred for the main house earlier. And he might be able to help out Gaara sooner as well. Just a few thoughts.
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Reviewed By: Soliderboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's good update soon!
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Title: Whew, sorry bout my last review
Reviewed By: Interestedfeller On: January 28, 2008 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, I didn't read your footnote. Great chapter addition, I read about the kiss and yea... in my head I was screaming NOOO another yaoi. Well I will read your story and review for every chapter. Very interesting, the plotline of him becoming a dictator is very original. Anyways, I'll be as consistent as you are, unless you change your mind about this being a yaoi =( to which I will halt. Update when possible. BTW, if you make a pairing, please don't be sappy lol, I know you are capable of pulling off a great one as evident in your writing thus far
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Title: Yaoi or not?
Reviewed By: Interestedfeller On: January 28, 2008 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this a Yaoi? If it is, well I'm disappointed. The introduction was great and I was expected a great story. I hope it doesn't turn out to be a yaoi, but it is your story.
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Reviewed By: Naye On: January 02, 2008 10:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good opening here. I hope the pairing is Naruto/Hinata for this fic.
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